Fantasy-2004 Novel

[Adrianne]

So here's the situation, my little band of travelers is about to leave the safety of the valley that they are in. The culture they are leaving is a agricultural society, with out any electricity or mechanical convenience. Everything is done with animals and wagons. The world beyond the valley has advanced.

I'm trying to decide how much further advanced the rest of the world has become. Do I make it so advanced that riding horses would be really a strange thing to be doing, or just advanced so that going by horse is still the norm?

[Loki]

I dont know. What about doing something in between like the normal ppl drive cars but it still isnt completely strange only uncommon that someone would ride a horse. Like its outdated but not outlived. Know what I mean?

[Adrianne]

I like that idea. They would eventually would come across roads that have paving stones, not just dirt roads. Some advancement, just not so much that they would be completely overwhelmed by a brand new world.

[Adrianne]

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