Post by Loki on Apr 18, 2007 3:17:16 GMT -5
this is my poetry. Its probably what Im best at anyway here's some of it
Would I?[/u]
If I could start again,
what would I become?
Would I be the same old me
at the end of this loaded gun?
Would I live by these lies
that seem such an uncomforting home?
Would I stay locked inside
my heart of a tomb?
Would so many people
still ride me to the end?
Would I ever rest
from tragedy's hand?
Would so many people put
their faith in me?
Would I actually fulfill
that potential they see?
Would comfort come
at a dark night's done?
Would I be the same old me
at the end of this loaded gun?
(btw i think it needs a better name gimme ideas)
Im Just A Guy[/u]
Her name was Dani
I admit she was too young for me
But she had a spark
that made me bark
and howl at the moon we would see
she is from far back when
I still remember then
How she kissed me for the first
and last time that made my heart burst
with feelings that I would forever carry for thee
Im just a guy
a wandering heart
caught from the very start
by a single lucky lady
I admit thought that I am the lucky one
shot from the barrel of a gun
I was doomed from the very start
Her name was Kay
she seemed to smile with the dawn of a new day
She kept me in a trance
that kept my feet in a constant dance
a tango around my heart
a number that never ended nor would never start
Seemed to just go on and on
till the break of dawn
Brought by her new smile
that made my soul go wild
and made me jump with glee
Im just a guy
doomed from the start
to live with my heart
in two separate parts
Im now caught between the two
I lived for both of you
but knew that soon that pain would not be true
Her name was Kat
she made the pieces of my soul come back
Her body was a piece
that made my inner thoughts release
Her mind was one to marvel
She always seemed to excel
and when she held me tight
on those faithfully cold nights
I felt so alive and helped me seem so free
Im just a guy
who knew pain to not be true
as it grew on you
and you showed me what to do
Another one it seems
my heart finely tuned at the seams
so broken and so trashed from my shattered dreams
Im sitting here just wondering what it takes to be
not just a guy
but someone who will be happy with me
Untitled[/u]
Emptiness dwells
inside this chest
with nothing more
except chaotic unrest
Quarrels through
the darkness appear
as anger and confusion
run from ear to ear
my body trembles
as the air hits my side
for its cold and blows
right where my emptiness resides
A hole blows through
where something once was
as the only steps I take
are covered in blood
A few spoken words
left me hanging by a thread
You gave me a look
and just a few words instead
so I wait
as you told me I should
with nothing more
than something misunderstood
Youve been gone for so long
I wonder if you'll ever come back
for you have my heart
and I dont want it back
You can keep it
forever more
as long as i can catch a
glimpse of an angel
Would I?[/u]
If I could start again,
what would I become?
Would I be the same old me
at the end of this loaded gun?
Would I live by these lies
that seem such an uncomforting home?
Would I stay locked inside
my heart of a tomb?
Would so many people
still ride me to the end?
Would I ever rest
from tragedy's hand?
Would so many people put
their faith in me?
Would I actually fulfill
that potential they see?
Would comfort come
at a dark night's done?
Would I be the same old me
at the end of this loaded gun?
(btw i think it needs a better name gimme ideas)
Im Just A Guy[/u]
Her name was Dani
I admit she was too young for me
But she had a spark
that made me bark
and howl at the moon we would see
she is from far back when
I still remember then
How she kissed me for the first
and last time that made my heart burst
with feelings that I would forever carry for thee
Im just a guy
a wandering heart
caught from the very start
by a single lucky lady
I admit thought that I am the lucky one
shot from the barrel of a gun
I was doomed from the very start
Her name was Kay
she seemed to smile with the dawn of a new day
She kept me in a trance
that kept my feet in a constant dance
a tango around my heart
a number that never ended nor would never start
Seemed to just go on and on
till the break of dawn
Brought by her new smile
that made my soul go wild
and made me jump with glee
Im just a guy
doomed from the start
to live with my heart
in two separate parts
Im now caught between the two
I lived for both of you
but knew that soon that pain would not be true
Her name was Kat
she made the pieces of my soul come back
Her body was a piece
that made my inner thoughts release
Her mind was one to marvel
She always seemed to excel
and when she held me tight
on those faithfully cold nights
I felt so alive and helped me seem so free
Im just a guy
who knew pain to not be true
as it grew on you
and you showed me what to do
Another one it seems
my heart finely tuned at the seams
so broken and so trashed from my shattered dreams
Im sitting here just wondering what it takes to be
not just a guy
but someone who will be happy with me
Untitled[/u]
Emptiness dwells
inside this chest
with nothing more
except chaotic unrest
Quarrels through
the darkness appear
as anger and confusion
run from ear to ear
my body trembles
as the air hits my side
for its cold and blows
right where my emptiness resides
A hole blows through
where something once was
as the only steps I take
are covered in blood
A few spoken words
left me hanging by a thread
You gave me a look
and just a few words instead
so I wait
as you told me I should
with nothing more
than something misunderstood
Youve been gone for so long
I wonder if you'll ever come back
for you have my heart
and I dont want it back
You can keep it
forever more
as long as i can catch a
glimpse of an angel